
How the Big Book became less dogmatic and more suggestive: From Writing The Big Book by William Schaberg Chapter 29 Promoting and Editing the Multilith Copy Significant Contributions from Dr. Howard By far the most comprehensive changes to the book were suggested by a man who is identified only as "Dr. Howard," a New Jersey psychiatrist who was given a Multilith Copy to review. After reading it, the doctor was "greatly interested and enthusiastic," but he had a number of significant criticisms to offer. Most especially, he insisted that the tone of the book was far too dogmatic and directive. "His idea," Bill says, "was to remove all forms of coercion, to put our fellowship on a 'we ought' basis instead of a 'you must' basis." Doing so would mean the entire front half of the book would have to be reedited, page-by-page, taking out all of the directions, all of the "yous," all of the "musts" and replacing them ...